Monday, November 17, 2008

jane in my neverland

Are you Jane in my neverland?
who made me crazy,
with a glimpse of your golden hair,
with the note -
that bore the melancholy,
and colourful my dream becomes-
with your stroke of brush and...........
............... it stunned me.

Are you Jane in my neverland?
coming down from clouds
having dreams with you.
and you made my neverland
EDEN.
I was lost in my eden.....
and i lost you-
SLOWLY
and SILENTLY
you went away.


Are you Jane in my neverland????
my eternal truth;
no lie dares to touch.
Pure..........
an unread book.
no one opened.
who are you?????
I see you with my closed eyes
and heaven comes with your embrace.
Startled at your breath-
you come as a breeze.
and dances my legs with you.



Oh! you went???????
Why i opened my eyes???????



Are you Jane in my neverland???
my angel-
or just an imagination???
awaits a blink.
who are you?
my eyes are stuck for you,
at the milky way.
may be-
your glimpse will once again bring back.......
.... that melancholy note..




Jane come to me.
I want to see you,
touch you,
want to know if........




my dreams are true.
True like that Melancholy Note.

3 comments:

Nivedita KAYAL said...

a very beautiful one...it reminded me of........

Nivedita KAYAL said...

really sumit...khub sundor bhabe relate kore likhechis...

the brush...melancholy...colours...hindi te "alankar" bole...i guess...trying to remember.......

but seriously...u've gr8 imagining power...

shukriya said...

chorom to bhai